Good Writing: 36 Ways to Improve Your Sentences

Gathering a “kit bag of rules for good writing” from his experience as a journalist, an executive in publicity and marketing, and as a spiritual coach and author, Neal Allen walks through his thirty-six rules to craft better sentences. Each rule includes examples followed by a pair of essays written by Allen and his wife, Anne Lamott, the author of several novels and nonfiction books, including the acclaimed guidebook Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life. Some rules are straightforward (Use strong verbs. Don’t show off. Remove the boring stuff), while others are more provocative (Smell the roses. Give your sentence a finale. Write the hard stuff). Each rule is meant to encourage and challenge writers, and be considered as suggestions for how and what to communicate in a sentence. “This book is curious about what happens after you’ve got a sentence in mind, maybe even after you’ve finished your entire first draft,” writes Allen in the introduction. “The book embraces persuasion in its biggest sense—not to win an argument, but to be elegant; to convince a reader to continue on to the next sentence.”



























